menn you cartoon no have sound
yeah, i know, i only got flash a couple of weeks ago, didn't really know how to implement sound. Still, i do now, so i'll hopefully have sound when i make another.
yeah alot of room !
i didt get the story nither the animation please improve on these things
Yeah, there wasn't really a story to it. I'll try to spend more time with the animating next time though, and thanks for the comment.
I admit that I'm not impressed when I don't find any sound or music in something. It was pretty funny, however, when you acknowledged that there wasn't any in the credits. The animation looked pretty rough, but I guess it wasn't terrible. If you ever need to do something like this again, I would be glad to appear as a voice actor. The coolest part was when it zoomed out into the alien's eye. If you could put in music/sounds and work on animation, this could definitley be something I would recommend.
Thank you for the review, i'm going to definitely have sound with the next one though. As for the animation, i'll spend more time with it and hopefully i'll get better, as this is only the first thing I've made.