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This is the first chapter of a new series I have been working on. I've been a flash designer for a little over 2 years now and have started several flash cartoons. This series depicts the wizard as he goes on various quests through the different chapters. Stay tooned for the sequel as it is already in the works!

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Perspective

I like the idea so different from all flash cartoons here. The music is perfect and work well with the story but i don't like your drawing skills. Is all too flat, why you draw in a medieval perspective style?

Ok...

It was rather a good flash if you didn't make the scenes lag so much. (The flash gave a lord of the rings aura)

All in all, it was pretty good

The art was nice, timing really wasn't bad at all

my only complaint so far is the jumpiness in the animation, i think you should spend a little more time to streamline it, for example: the flies in the beginning. They just jumped erratically around the screen. I don't mind loops in backgrounds, but at least make it a good loop

Nice...

For what it's worth, this is pretty damn good. The only serious problem that needs to be attended to is the timing (see for yourself), and even that isn't too bad. Be sure to tighten up the Frames Per Second in future, and you should be set, dude. You have an incredibly vivid imagination, and I'd like to see it develop into excellence.

Happy New Year, and good luck inter future endeavours.

Sincerely,

Harlequin de Rustre

RaptorVenom responds:

Thank you all for reviewing this. I will take these critics and try to make the sequel even better.

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Votes
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Score
3.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 5, 2010
3:47 PM EST
Genre
Action