For a first flash you did damn fine! i really enjoyed it alot and look forward to more stuff from you.
Thanks, I have more stuff planned.
was the girl raped when she was young? that's the feeling i got from this flash. reminded me of Silent Hill alot. very entertaining
That was a stunning animation; amazing work!
P.S.: Maybe you should have given some credit to Radiohead too, because this was originally written and performed by them. Still a great performance by Kathryn Dearborn.
Thanks for the favorite.
Silent Hill much?
This reminded me greatly of Silent Hill except instead of a siren changing what happened i changed when she fell back into slumber in her own bedroom at night. Kind of doesn't make much sense but still very nice if you ask me.
Animation: Love how everything is always moving in each frame, this is a very nice first flash you have created, nice job. Like how you used as little detail on her face as well.
Storyline: Falling between breathing in reality and being another cog in the machine when she sleeps.
Audio: Very great soft song set to a creepily nice piece.
Overall: This was actually quite good.
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Thanks for the high score and concentrating on the good of it. This is quite useful to me as I've known the weaknesses of it before I submitted it.
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Sorry for the late review, but I know that late reviews are better than no reviews at all.
~ Animation ~
I do like the wavy animation style here and do find it very fitting for a nightmare type submission. That being said I would love to see how this would be done with normal animation as well.
~ Graphics ~
Pretty decent graphics all around. I feel that you couldn't go into very much detail because of the shaky animation, but if it was normal animation I would expect this to be much more detailed than it was. I think that's really the only thing that took the score down for you in my review was the lack of detail, but again I understand the situation.
~ Story ~
I love music videos that can tell their own little story. I agree that it looks very Silent Hill like and I like the randomness, which I feel gives an extra bit of creepiness to it.
I tried to look for a deeper meaning within the story itself, but really couldn't generate one. Perhaps there wasn't suppose to be a deeper meaning more than a girl's nightmare, but if there was I couldn't see it.
~ Audio ~
The song was great and I really liked how it went with the animation. There wasn't any needs for sound effects in this one. If you were to make another submission I wouldn't mind hearing how it would sound with creepy sounds and a scarier song.
~ Overall ~
A very nice submission all around. I'll drop you a PM about something and see if you wouldn't mind.
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