Ummm
Obviously nice you said you put no plot, point, structure, time or any of that into it, Ill give it what it deserves.
Newgrounds is for posting up flash pieces you TRY on not little practice pieces, I hope you didnt expect people to praise you for this, this is very pointless.
Also, I know you'll probably respond with something completely irrelevant so i dont really care for your response, for you wont really care for mine, just thought I'd let you know.