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My best and last flash

rated 1.42 / 5 stars
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Jan 2, 2010 | 2:31 AM EST

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Hint: When given the option press retry.

This is my best and last flash that I have been building for the last few days. This is my way of retiring from the NG world and saying goodbye. It's a little glorifying of the NG world but that's because I love everyone in the NG world so so much. Thank you guys. I won't go into to much detail about what the flash is. I pefer to let you be the judge.
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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


Well I appreciate you effort to be humorous, but this is pretty much a failed attempt. The loading screens went on for way to long to even be funny, and it was obvious that it wasn't a real preloader.

If the flash movie after 'retrying' actually had some content I could see the joke I suppose, but the poorly drawn stick man just isn't doing it for me.

The flash lacks a single audio clip at all, either voice acting or music. The majority of the flash is just staring at a fake loading bar and then you get a bittersweet ending with the stickman. To say the least, this could have used a lot of work. A coherent storyline would have been nice, as well as some sound.


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Kieran123 responds:

very true. Next time I make a fake loading screen I'll narrate it. Thanks for the help.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

Poorly done

I have to say for something that was only 25 kb I was expecting it to load quickly and instead I get met with two screens of loading bars and then I have to watch a very poorly done flash. The only humorous part of this was the loading bars since as soon as one got done loading a new frame with two of them showed up.

The small flash itself wasn't even funny to me. This just seems to be something you slapped together in about five minutes with little to no thought put into it. As far as the whole thing goes the loading bar gets you hyped but then the small animation is a let down.

My suggestions are to go the flash tutorial section of the site and learn a bit more about animating and to slow down and spend more time working on it. If you actually put some effort into it and spend some time on it instead of calling people dumb for watching it you could have a bit of potential.

Overall, go back and learn a bit more of flash and spend some more time working on making a bigger and longer flash.

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Kieran123 responds:

:'( I spent three years on this.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


hey Kieran123,

Simple loading bar is well made but that's about it. I bet you knew you were going to get some sort of reaction when you made this. But hey, that's the whole point, isn't it?

Nobody likes to be told they're dumb, ESPECIALLY when they're doing you a favour. You requested a review, you're getting one - this was utterly boring to watch. Very little if any comic relief, and that only at the expense of the watcher. Poor humour.

It was a good idea, but poorly executed. I would have liked to see a few more gimmicks or add-ons to make this a full-fledged flash, and I was kind of waiting for a better "gotcha" moment. Instead it kept going on and on and on.

Again, great idea. The plot is interesting, but very basic and unsatisfying ending. Good graphics.

I don't like loading screens, so why do this to me? You already know, don't you? Thanks for letting me watch.

--Production-- = 00/20
--Watchability-- = 00/20
--Genius-- = 01/20
--Flair-- = 00/20
--Tilt-- = 00/20



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Kieran123 responds:

Thankyou for enjoying it.
I will take your response on board with future flash endeavours.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


Well, in a bid to add some parity to the NG World here, I feel that I must do something for the parity of the piece. Frankly, it's poor from the start to the finish. Sure, there was a quirky joke with the loading bar and yes, it did drag on for too long, from even a comedic point of view.

There is no colour to this, there are just slides of typed words, which I can get in larger quantities, with better storylines from my local bookshop. It's not that difficult.

Work on the drawing side of things and if you insist on making this piece again, perhaps consider hiring a voice actor to read the lines out, putting a subtitle bar across the base of the screen, to show what is being said, while incorporating it properly with the flash.

Then you can work on the animation, which will develop as the piece progresses along other avenues, such as a better level of drawing quality. I can appreciate it if you are drawing with a mouse, but this is hardly trying. Try zooming in and using a smaller mouse pointer, to get a higher degree of control for your drawing. When you zoom out, it will look so much better. After that, you can make individual parts of them move, as opposed to just moving the whole image across the screen, like poorly driven shadow puppets.

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Kieran123 responds:

Don't talk to me about puppets. It's triggering.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Quite Funny Indeed :)

I was scared when the Loader said there was an error, and I had no idea that that would happen. ^^ It made me do an epic lol XD I love it 10/10!

Kieran123 responds:

thanks i very much enjoy a positive review. the only problem is that your a cat so fuck off!!!