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Better than a lot of crap I see on here...

but still not great. The music fit well, and the animation was swell...but everything seemed a little bland. What you need is some inspiration. Get some people together. Get a really good story and work a little on your animation, and you'll be making some high grade stuff.

Pretty Good Stuff

I think you are very good at animating with the paint tool. However, the art needs some work. Here are some suggestions:

-Spend some time to make a detailed background.
-Use more than one size of the paint brush tool
-Make the lasers more, well, lasery... Everything pretty much has the same texture. Try experimenting with "Alpha" and "Soften Fill Edges".
-Shading
-The cracks in the ground are decent, but need some work.

Anyways, like I said the animation itself was really good, it is just the details that need some work.

Good Job.

wow awesome

something new. never seen this before

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Dec 29, 2009
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