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The Early Attemps - Ep. 2

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Dec 23, 2009 | 12:40 PM EST

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The Early Attemps is about some prehestoric amphibians who make their way out of the swamps and do their first steps towards the top of the evolution - not without tripping up on some unforseen difficulties.

In the second episode the gang has to confront the problem that Carl is becoming a carnivore and is about to discover a new "taste" in friendship. num num num...


So here it is. I hope you enjoy it and that you have a merry christmas or whatever you are celebrating.

So long,

GroggyLobster. :D



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


I have to agree with Sabtastic. It has taken waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long to load.

But the preloader art is very nice. So I shall give you 1 star.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

The preloader took me over a half hour...

It's still not finished.... :\

Might I suggest re-sizing the graphics that you used in this flash? Something is making this FAR too large for passive viewing.. It's a shame, because I think that fact alone will bring your review scores down. Very few people will bother to wait for this to finish loading.. And by the time they do, they could possibly be too frustrated to comment kindly.

On the bright side, though, the pre-loader frame looks great! Sets up for a potentially great flash movie.

Sorry.. Hopefully this gets fixed soon.
Good luck!