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cloak

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Cloak is a short animation about a few cloaked figures causing havoc on a dark night.

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Nice!

Short, but awesome! Simple, but still, I like it.


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Pretty cool and freaky

I had to watch it twice to really understand what was going on, but it was interesting to say the least. The animation was alright for the most part, though I mainly enjoyed the close ups and the guy catching fire. Sound wise the music and laughing was dead on. I liked it.


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Ninja-Walrus responds:

I'm so happy how well the music turned out, because it was mostly a coincidence how they worked together. I didn't make it, I had completely forgotten to credit the author when I first submitted it, it's there now, though. Thanks for the review!


good start

first off thank you for giving me credit for the song. now about the animation, good start I must say needs some work and it could be a bit longer. I do hope to see more as you progress as an animator and maybe you will use some of my other songs for your next animation :) keep up th good work


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creepy

Not a bad animation. Better artwork and story development would help to give you a better score. I hope this passes judgment though, you've got a cool concept here.


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Ninja-Walrus responds:

Thanks for the review! And yes, it passed judgement! YAY! =D


Neat in its own way

I thought the animation was pretty good, not the best but decent. If I had to make recommendations, I'd say use some more dynamic camera angles for your scenes, the majority of the animation played out like a side-scroller videogame. And add a little detail to the landscape you used, or make it darker to suit the time of day.
But anyways, it was a bit eerie, the music and sounds really helped out in that regard. Hope you make improvements.


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Ninja-Walrus responds:

alright, camera angles, I'll keep that in mind for next time! Thanks for the review!

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Views
3,627
Votes
241
Score
2.81 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 22, 2009
11:58 PM EST
Genre
Experimental
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