cool

cool

Delectable

Simply scrumptious intent on the part of one but although one might not, you should however still to be finding a considerate fin or else one of many. Overall your flash was film worthy in my opinion and I wouldn't at all be surprised to turn on the television and see such a wondrous creation. Expertly done, keep up the good work.

~monkeyspan~

Hmm

Not bad you showed some potential here with your first flash effort. Some things that you should improve on, firstly you need to add sound some bullet sound effects especially would have improved the feel of your flash and secondly some more effort with your graphics would have made the killings seem more real and thus give the flash an overall more gritty feel. There are several aspects that were really well done though, such as the length of the flash which was great you gave your flash enough time to build up to a cliffhanger of a finale and the character design of the main character was interesting. Overall a solid effort, needs sound though.

well it was okay

it needs sounds some music and really try basing it on some true event cause stuff like this actualy happens

good potential

good idea
nice flash
definately needs sounds!