The positive part of this submission was the interesting animation style. It looks like you put a lot of work into making this look good.
I would say, however that the negatives might overshadow this very positive aspect. The sound quality was absolutely wretched. It was always either crackly, in the case of background voice overs too quiet, or in the case of foreground voices too loud. The voice acting is dry and unenthusiastic and the script was kind of boring. If this were re-released with polished audio I may consider rating higher.