you are terrible at flash
its not interesting its just words and shaking trees.
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this is the intro to an up coming anime series. it contains sprites. i decided to take it out cause it messed up the whole file so i took it out and made a seperate thing out of it. all rights go to nintendo and the people who made the sprites and audio.
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i made a better intro for the dark knight. i still need voice actors.
link5019 responds:
Hey its the second revision. and its kinda like zelda uo. Im not terrible I was just short on time.
Well...
I think you have an interesting idea for a story and I won't criticize your animation since it might work out and I myself am no animator, but take an English class! Beginnings of sentences weren't capitalized and I couldn't tell you how many words were misspelled.
link5019 responds:
thanks this was just the intro but it will be anime not sprites
pretty good
like other said there is room for improvement. but you got a nice story there. I liked the fact that you used pictures from the actual game as well. keep going!
Wow
This just really isn't good. Your grammar and spelling are horrible, Kokori forest "Burning" actually made me break into laughter, and although the animation was...ok at best, it just didn't flow or really make sense.
link5019 responds:
i know the grammer was misspelled but like i said i salvaged as much as i could.
Room for improvement
I can see what it is that you're trying to accomplish, but I feel that you should put more work into the story. There are several mistakes regarding grammar and word usage, making the introduction difficult to read and understand.
The animations are good, but they are very small, making it harder to see and enjoy the action sequences.
link5019 responds:
i know. i salvaged what i could. but i have a problem in making the series because i need voice actors. if you could look at my news and respond if you want to help.
oh and don't worry the actual series will be anime with a bigger screen. right now i need to put the finishing touchs on the characters and get voice actors