i think it ok
i couldnt read it the writing was to small and the picture flash to fast put in a way to read it at ur own pace and a zoom
ps is the water on the beach a pokemon game sprite no criticism for it just wanted to know
Author Comments
All of this was written and animated by me in six hours, most of the scenes, like the beach, I had made myself, and I always wanted to do a Zelda comic ever since I was a young boy. Any criticism would be greatly appreciated seeing as how I am going to make a second episode, and i want it to be better then this one.