A few tips
increase your frame rates to at least 18 or 24 to make this smoother. Not bad for a first attempt. Love the beat sounds like an instrumental off soundclick or something made by alchemist.
Author Comments
My first flash movie posted on Newgrounds !!
meh
nto a bad concept, and sort of heartwarming, but the ending totally killed it. never write it if its not proper english. but work on it though. you need to work on animations, and start passing english.
DouglasUFO responds:
sorry man .... but that was something even unintentionally! ^^.... e. .. is already all correct !!...
but....thanks :)
That was cute.
Im a dog person so that was perfact.
I kinda liked it.
The beginning wasn't great, but the end made up for it quite well, It wasn't bad for a first time flash
not bad at all!
The message is nice, and the music is a good selection(credit the author of the audio).
The animation was a bit choppy and needs a little bit of improvement.Anyway the flash is good for being your first post on here, so keep it up! ^_^
