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my second flash. that is all.
It is still too fast. For some other project maybe you could have some time between the tries with some sorta thinking process or what's going on in his head. That and sound I would most likely give it a 9/10 or a 4/5.
Thanks for the new idea! i may just use it!
make SPACES between your frames. Bad score for copying and it is way too fast.
I give you a 5 because this movie has potential just that you screwed up the speed of the movie. THere is alot of Frame by frame animation in here and you made everything so fast not many viewers can understand it at first glance. (I think you were trying to show someone trying to blow down a door so he can escape... Lol.) Slow down the frames per second at it'll be understandable and plz add some colour to it. Hope this helps.
Thanks for the constructive criticism. I changed the frame reate down to 15, so there you go!
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