Nice Duke Nukem reference. > D
loll!!!!!!!! i love this one
I am glad I caught the next one going through judgement again :D. I really like these, good work.
This was a fairly good animation, despite a few points of contention.
First, I am a fan of plot. There really isn't much of a story without it, wouldn't you say? XD But I will agree that trying to read all the lines detracts from the rest of the animation.
Why? Because I was so worried about missing an important storyline that I couldn't focus on the action!
I would suggest keeping the dialogue, but maybe getting voiceovers to read the lines? That way we can enjoy the plot AND the sweet animation all at the same time. :)
Other than that, and a few grammar errors here and there, this was really good. Looking forward to more entries.
Awesome story line but needs a little more less blocky movements. it looks too much like a video game...unless its suposed to 0.o the musics good and it was entertaining...if your trying to add comedy you may want to try a little harder