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Dawning Dusk Episode 1

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EDIT: I reuploded with the into and a smaller filesize, but that also hurt the video guality. sorry.

Well, this is my first sprite movie, so its probably not that good, but Im getting better, and I really like the storyline I have (although its not to clear in this 2 min. episode) Feel free to offer advice and/or CONSTRUCTIVE critism (no, you suck, retard) Thx for watching!


that was good

i dont know why they sed it sucks

Audio especially

you need better background audio and sound effects, and voice acting would be a nice bonus, but not as necessary. Moves pretty choppy, so try to smooth out your animations as well, if possible.

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Ok to be fair this isn't that bad but the animation isn't smooth at all and everything seems choppy. As for the storyline it seem way to much like a Super Mario Bros Z rip off. Kingdom Hearts seems weird espeacially since KH has nothing to do with Mario or sonic.

Its a decent effort but work more on the smoothness and the storyline will need a lot of work to make worth watching,

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9.8 MB on this? This wouldn't have taken even 1,5 MB. err and u lack of some sound effects and graphic correction.


maybe if u just improved alittle
on everything

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1.88 / 5.00

Dec 11, 2009
9:52 PM EST