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(judging by your other flashes im starting to think that its ok to have a short flash, but im being off topic) any way yea it could be faster and longer, but it can also use a story line and make other flashes that branch from it or some that or related in some way, that way people wont get bored with random madness flashes. by the way nice touch on the dead bird it didnt even see it coming