The writing was overly cheesey and didn't make me laugh at all. As always, Kirb, your animation is respectable, but the writing was lack-luster. Which greatly surprised me since the writer is involved in one of the more talented groups, team fourstar.
The voice is more annoying than entertaining. The jokes didn't realy get me too well. I didn't find anything funny except "Sweet Jesus they're good" but even that wasn't really funny either.
Iunno, cheesey humor is just lost on me. I wish this got a little more creative, or had more than just a narrator.
Over-all, the flash was good, I just personally didn't like it or find it entertaining or funny in any way. You can take my comments personally, or just ignore em'. But I made a review just the same.
There is a silver lining though: At least it isn't The Street Fighter Club.