Touching till the End
The Beggining was Great till the Ending. The End Killed the Whole Mood for me but it was a great flash thou 3/5 and 8/10
ps If its a memorial for your Baby Brother than why did you do what you did at the end?
That was... unexpected
I was taking this seriously until... that. Very good work
That was just unspeakably awesome thank you
it was alright...
i liked the story at the beginning, but at the ending, man...
sure wished for something better...
He Who Cast The 1st Stone, or In this case fish
Dam it hurts to pass a kidney stone, that must suck. But this is humorous and holidayish as well