Lots of things wrong with this flash, chief.
For starters, why does one have to press the arrow keys to continue the flash, I mean, it gets pretty annoying. Also, there is no animation in this flash, it is just a bunch of still pictures that move with a button press. And the art just isn't that good, chief. I mean stick figures, of all things? I'm sorry, chief. But this isn't so much a movie but rather a slide show, a pretty poor slide show at that. If you plan on improving this series of yours, add animation to it because next to no one likes the whole button pressing thing. This flash needs loads of improvement, best of luck.