Alright.
This is basically my work for my 10th grade English class. I had to retell the story of "Lather and Nothing Else" by Hernando Tellez, so yeah.
Please don't blam this because I'm getting graded for this!!! D:
Thanks guys.
P.s I do know that there is a slight audio jump from loudish to soft. :P
Pure Irony
Ironic, I read this book just a few weeks ago in grade 8. I like the fact you have the whole story in there but the flash could've been a little better. And you could of maybe not used kill bill music. And of course color would have been nice as well.
CONHAWK117
uuuhhhhhhh yeah about that......
......the animation sucked donkey balls but you will say that i can't do flash so i shouldn't jugde but thats only because i don't have the eqouipment to do so but although that i liked the musics
soundtrack
ok so you got the entire Kill Bill soundtrack in there, wouldnt hurt to give some credit.
also: saying that you dont want to be blammed in the description makes people want to do just that and it doesnt come across very confident (and makes people believe you made an inferior movie even before they have watched)
Too slow
This was waaay too slow-paced. You should have held back on all the "made by" and black text screens, man. What saved it in my opinion was all the Kill Bill soundtracks. Made it somewhat emotional at points. Not bad lipsyncing either.
wow that was so moving
i never had a flash change my life forever untill today