Well...
The Animation could be better as he is just standing and being slided around. Music and some sound effects would be better.
Author Comments
DO NOT BLAM!!!!
This is also a school project and will probably be blammed anyways. But he is a dude, with a life. Who fights fries, has the ruler on his side, and turns into condiments. Weird... EH?
Please print ledgibly
I can appreciate that this is a work that some time was put in to, but if you were to improve it, I think the best way would be to improve the readability of the text. Either give me more time to distinguish bits of lettuce from bits of letters, improve the contrast, or redo the lettering altogether. And I'll blam it if I want, dont tell the viewer what to do.
needs sound
Make videos with sound, people tend o like them 10 times more if they do have sound.