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I'd find a toddler think this is funny. Needs more comedy, Something that gives us a great laugh.
Hello!
This is the third episode of "Yoshi's Ball"!
It' a very SHORT episode... the next one will be better.
Thanks for watching!
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I'd find a toddler think this is funny. Needs more comedy, Something that gives us a great laugh.
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Well I don't really get it. Yoshi drops a ball on Peach then kicks it away. Not much story development there. You really need to work on making this series have a bit more meat to it...something more interesting. Also, the graphics need improving. Try to move the camera around a bit more. Perhaps zoom in sometimes or something just to get rid of the stationary camera.
Ok But
it was way to short!
A nice little addition to your series.
It wasn't bad. It needs a little more work here and there, but overall I see some work put into it. But try to make them a little longer. You're doing a great job, just keep practicing.
Urrrr...
Well, I didn't really get the joke (if there was one)