"Liquid Bread" is my favorite line! Nice work. The syncing of the action is a lot cleaner on this one than the first. Good job sir!
It's alright, not brilliant. Voices could be a bit clearer though.
This is relatively funny, but it would be a lot better if the voices had a bit more expression (they'd be easier to understand too). It would also be a lot better if things actually moved in the frame, because at the moment it looks less like an animation and more like a slideshow.
I've given you an okay score though, because you said you were thinking of spending more time on these and I think with better animation and better quality audio they could be a pretty funny series.
I love it. It's really funny. The only small drawback is the animation, it's not that good. But that doesnt matter. I like the comedy.