Need little better work on the graghics...
I liked the adventure elements of the game, but it was a bit odd. Wasn't really sure what was happening and what the mission was really.
I think you have decent ideas though. Some more experience in developing games and I'll think you'll make something really good.
this needs some serious work. its like "BAMMM! GET FLOWER PLAY MINIGAMES YES?!" and black eyed peas don't do good as game music. try searching around on the NG audio portal.