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The story takes place on planet earth in the year 2246
Where the two cylinders of red and green drive for domination of the planet ..
Red units harvested on the planet and slavery increased in comparison with
green their troops for peace on the planet but that's worse because they are themselves survivors.
But you will see yourself.
Decent for a first flash
It was pretty cool, sorta like madness except in space. I think that it had plenty of violence and it kept the action up the entire movie. I think that maybe you could have done something that made it hard for the main character, maybe him actually getting shot or something. Just to mix it up a bit.
I think that you should also make the opening credits different. They went by either too fast, or too slow. It took forever to read the first slide, yet when I was about to finish the second one, it went to fast. I think that maybe you could either learn to put in buttons for that, or you could just learn to change the time. Good luck with the series.
Vzhledem k tomu ze tenhle rewiev pisu tobe a ne nekomu jinemu tak snad nevadi ze pisu cesky.
K animaci nemam co dodat ta byla dobra, jen bych trochu upravil ten zacatek. Nektere texty jsem si stihl precist 2x a vic a jiny jsem nestih docist vubec.
You need to work on your pacing. It's supposed to be an action movie, but everything happens very slowly in it. Comparing it to Madness, which was obviously an inspiration, you'll notice in the Madness videos everyone moves very quickly. Don't worry if your flash ends up being a little shorter, it's more important for it to be interesting than long.
Also I had some trouble with the first introduction screen not advancing until I right-clicked and pressed Forward, then right-clicked and pressed Play.
Those two points aside, the animation was smooth and the graphics were good. Keep it up, and keep improving.
Bad parody of Madness....
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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