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Emerald Steath part 1.5

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THESE ARE MY CURRENT SKILLS!

Notes: i gave up on tht three floor crap, it got annoying, some animation is laggy mostly cuz of the portal Mecha sonic opens. like i said some sound got messed up, u notice mario says the same stuff twice, it wont happen again, plz do tell me how u like it, give me suggestions and stuff, this series will b very surprising, i can tell ya tht XD, i did RUSH it a bit at the end

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mecha soinc

can i please have mecha sonic voices?


kirbyky100 responds:

PM me


Overall animation isn't to bad

I think you need to work a bit on the dialog. Also use a spell check perhaps? :P Some of the dialog is hard to read since it isn't displayed long enough.

Maybe add a black bar at the bottom and put all the dialogue there so it is easily readable. You could also put the name before the speech like "Mario: text goes here"


kirbyky100 responds:

im doin tht for episode 3, the space-bar dialog boxes Alvin uses


sigh

A cheap rip off of SMBZ. Not that it matters anyway whether it was original or not. Sprite animations lack so much but will get passed anyways. So, I guess it had good animation at least for sprites, comparable to early Alvin-Earthworm. Maybe if sprites could just have original stories and different styles of fighting then maybe I could think higher of them, but alas no.


kirbyky100 responds:

it seems like tht, but the story will b ratehr different, i have not included the main guys, tht will b in episode 3


subtitles to fast

ur animation is very good, i just dont like those close-ups on pixels graphics, and i cant read all the speechs, slow down them a little, r u thinking on a menu? u can add a scene selection maybe if its long i dont know what u have on mind. u didnt added a music too, sometimes it gives more life to the flash.



okay good job

didnt realy make much sense and lagged here and there but overall good sound quality and good flash probably could have spent a little more time fine tuning it
good animation anyway if this passes good job if it doesnt well keep on trying it


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