Well you did a great job with two things here, the first was the humour which was terrific i especially liked the last joke of getting real drunk and then going swimming, classic. The voice acting was the other thing that i liked about your flash, the voices were so great and its a shame you gave no credits at the end for them!, the guy with the purple hats voice was superb. Overall a great short.
Animation was alright but the story was... confusing... to say the least. If there's anything that needs to be known prior to it's viewing please let me know.
Reading the two stories would help a bit, though they don't have the little surreal man.
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