Here's a good idea...
I feel like they're getting shorter and shorter =(
I think you should take your episodes currently,and put them altogether in one flash without the outro. It'd make them longer,which everyone is complaining about. Otherwise,you're getting better.
Look, I know this site taught it was okay but...
But don't make sprite movies. And for god's sake, don't make animations about your fanfics. It's never as good as you think it is.
As for the movie itself, the text subtitles look awful, Most of the time, the subtitles don't even align, and putting them in an mspaint box makes them look even worse.
You have a lot of work to do, and this is your sixth episode? Go back, read some books on animation and flash, and don't come back until you've stopped using sprites in your flash animation and have found some good voice actors.
yeah last time I checked your account, you don't even animate, so unless you want to give really good advise, don't bother me. people like you aren't even worth it. P.S. I'm a better artist and programmer than you think. I don't care how adult you are. But telling someone they are no good at animating is flat out low. How about you get an attitude change, then talk to me. I can use sprites if I want. There are really good sprite movies here on this site. If you just come to play games, you should try to do your own animation. At least I tried. Loser.
Could be longer
you have good potentional, but to me, it could be better and longer, your good at pixel art, but for your next seriesyou make, make it something a little more difficult. Also make it longer if you want more viewers