Better, I suppose
But still lacking. Dark text boxes don't work well on dark backgrounds, they'd work best on the bottom of the screen. Sprites were quite small, and it lasted about 20 seconds.
o.o my advice :o
you made this even shorter then last time ~.~
give it some more action i feel like you're trying to leave us hanging for every next 10second episodes
other then that it was fine.
Shut up. At least I try! I don't leave people hanging I just don't know when to stop.
it was alright but heres some advise
first off you need to make it longer not allot of people like short sprite movies you need to add more plot story and fighting in this. Second you need to make the sprites bigger its really hard to see them with the view you have now so try and zoom in on them more. If you do that then this could be one of the better sprite animations on here keep it up and good job
It was Pretty good.
You could have used The actual Naruto Sprites.
Thanks for the nice advice