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The 3 of us episode 1

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My first official flash where me and my brothers surf the web, literally.

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i see something

i see that u siblings keep fighting on using the computer huh? xD an d u 3 must be addicts as well! if u r going to make more is these y not fix the audio first a and then in time fix your animation work! well! gl on this series! your gona need it! XP

I definitely recommend you keep at it.

Interesting idea, not bad story-telling. I have two suggestions: practice drawing as much as you can, it can only help you improve, and 2: If you can, try to improve the sound quality. I'm not sure where the blurriness of some of the sound is coming from, but it's probably a result of being too close to the microphone.

In any case, I like it. Hope to see more soon. :-)

It's a good idea

It's got a good and silly story to it which I can tell is what you were aiming for, but the quality of it isn't good enough. Brush up a little on the script, the artwork, and the sounds. Otherwise, you 3 kids are on the right track. Just work on what I told you. Also, try to add a preloader and deepen your voice using recording programs like Audacity.

Best of luck!

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