Just enough in the first episode to keep me interested, but I think the biggest problem is that it moves really, really slow. The dialogue is sort of bland and boring and doesn't seem like its quite there yet. The pace of the flash moves really slow, even if I do spam space to help progress the dialogue screen, but there really is not a whole lot happening between dialogues to keep my attention. The sprite animations are smooth thus far, so that's going to be no problem for the next one. But as of right now, this seemed more like a trailer than the first episode of a series. Will look forward to the next episode. Good luck.
I'm kinda impressed by this MGS is one of my all time favorite games and Mario is a frigin classic. For being your first flash you did very nice specially since this seems to actually be something not many others have done. I guess the only actual drawback would be try not doing a after almost everything Mario or Luigi says every once in awhile is good but after almost every other word isn't other then that small detail the whole thing was great I'll be looking for the rest of this series.
Your 1st animation... It's good. It has potentional... It's fresh, It's funny, it's.. well good.
Crtisism: Not much to say about it. You did excellent! Cept the animation looking a LIL stiff. But that's hard to notice. For a 1st animation its great as for the jokes good... The space to continune text... well Alvin used it.
You did a good job. You made nice costumizations and everything is just good.
Keep spriting my friend since you could just become as big as Alvin is.
This was a fantastic fusion flash of Mario & Metal Gear which was done to damn near perfection at least for a start,the sprites looked great & everybodies role looked great also the script was solid and overall it was a fantastic start to what looks to be a very promising series,i hope to see much more in the near future and it would be much apprciated if you could give this fan here a PM when the next episode is submitted in case i don't catch it cause i think this has that much potential to be one epic series,keep up the great work. =D
By the pushing space thing, he meant he doesn't like have to push space to proceed through the dialogue.
As for me , I really enjoyed it. It's a very good beginning episode. I would do without the a's so much in everything mario says. Italians don't speak with a's after thank. I liked the comedy behind the mc donnel mushroom. Nicely done.
I only hope you don't get bored and cut this series off part way through. I look forward to watching this one through.