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Slightlyman

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This is a short flash I've made during a media project, its fairly poor but I've only just started flash, its part of a viral add campaign for a movie that wont ever exist called "Slightly Man" in a world 200 years in the future where an evil corporation has reduced humanity to a conformist slave clone race

its not all that great and im expecting to get blammed but ive never actualy submited anythig so i thought id submit this

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Not bad really

Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.


Dannthecameraman responds:

thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is


hmm...

well there was no sound, and you didn't show what made him "different".The movie didn't really tie to the plot either.


Dannthecameraman responds:

its nto suposed to, the aim of the project was to create ambigous sensibility and not give anything away, in actualy fact the movie that its about that wont ever exist is a piss take of every superhero movie ever made but thanks for comenting


Er... right...

While this is an.. interesting flash.There was no sound. That really brought it down.



Empty-flash-Man

Just didn't really consist of much... Artwork was good, but there wasn't much real animation to speak of. If you were to draw it out into an actual story or purposeful flash then it would receive a much better score, atleast from me.


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Views
3,002
Votes
252
Score
2.03 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 14, 2009
1:08 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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