Dude these things are awesome i thought this would be a one thing episode but your on the road to doing like real anime episode epic ^.^
i dunno what is it, but it keeps me going and begging for more episodes, i just find it very itneresting, keep up the good amazing work there!
Again however, your character's emotions are either lacking or not powerful enough. They seem to act unusually. Remember to let character's emotions flow easily, have them work well.
Besides that, the animation flowed slightly rough but not like before so your doing good. One problem is the fact that the characters still look awkward at certain times from different angles, like Blane when he lowered his head sideways as he walked in with Jai through the door.
You have some things work, however, so keep it up.
Trying to capture the exact emotion a character is feeling is sometimes difficult for me but i'll keep practicing. Thank you!
I didn't even realize this was out
This is really good. The mood you set and follow up with in animation is impressive. The animation flows smoothly and just makes for an appealing episode. Yep, I'd say I'm rather hooked. ^^