My first proper animation. Originally it was for a school assignment but I decided to upload it and see what the flash animation community thinks of it. I am thinking of making more animations, but I don't have any great ideas. Some constructive feedback would be much appreciated.
Poorly done
It's lacking in every department by NG standards. Congrats on getting your first submission through the portal though. Check out the NG tutorials page and work on your art especially. That was the main thing that made the flash look bad. Just keep working at it and you'll keep getting better.
cool
the graphics are nothing special but it was really funny
you should add funny music in your next animation(but the whole song has to be in the movie, so I would search for a short one if I were you)
Haha
Random and funny
the animation is smooth
instead of making cars to move try to make a stickman race.....
Good Start
Lass. As a lead animator for Pixar for 10 years I can see will improve and do swell. Just learn the P.O.V. the trees and brick walls were totally out of proportion fix it. And all that sort of shit.
