I didn't like it, but I thought you made the story, which I thought was good. So I would give you credit for that. And then, I read your author comments, and laughed, finding that you didn't make the story. To be blunt, the graphics were horrible. That being said, I can't draw worth crap either. Anyway, nice try.
If its 2 harsh sry...
If this review is 2 harsh sry...DONT B A GOTH!!! all these movies about random people pointlessly killing (some exceptions made) are not entertaining. Make comedies. Not tragedies, its not what i want even in the "serious shorts" sections. Good art 4 a 2nd movie tho
Its a start
not bad for an amateur. :) and cool music, it went great with it.
Well as it's your first and you asked me not to be harsh I won't your working off an interesting concept. however you got the Myth wrong. the woman who lures men to their doom is a succubus and she drains their life force whilst 'doing the deed' thats how she kills them. Your interpretation was interesting but still slightly lacking I couldn't quit put my finger on it but 'somethign apeared to be wrong or missing. Good Luck with future submissions.