My disgust for this flash is unmatched. The only reason I put a number down for violence was because of the blood(which was POORLY done). First thing's first you slit someones throat not their forehead! this flash looks like it was done in a rush by a fourth grader! the only way you could improve this is totake it entirely redo it from the ground up, and you depicted her as a sort of siren(using a song to attract unsuspecting men). She should really do more than just kill them and drag their bodies into the cellar. Believe me I could go on and on but im just going to stop now.
mr-super-hero didnt get it. it was great. i liked it. a nice short little piece of art. very creepy!
But it IS pointless...
like seriously..no motive or anything, nothing interesting happens...she just kills the guy, dumps him in a pile of skeletons, and leaves. End of movie. You started with a good idea, a modification of the old Greek Sirens myth, but executed very poorly. Remake, but make it longer, give Tamara a motive, for shit's sake..do SOMETHING else...like, I dunno, make her a necrophiliac or something. She needs a motive or reason to randomly kill people. Try again using these tips and some I'm sure others have given you.
A michael jackson paraody gone wrong?
Ok so you basically said to yourself, "Hmm...I should make an animation of a girl who looks like michael jackson killing people for absoulutly no reason! Newgrounds will take anything that comes across them!" And walah! They did! I expect more even from a beginner, maybe the animation wont be at its best but I bet you can do alot better then this! The storyline? What the hell am I suppose to make of this? Stuff like has to have meaning and just making a random girl with bad breath attract a guy and then kill him? What am I suppose to feel now? If your just practicing at flash dont submit it to newgrounds, first make something that has a point.
This is not very good but i did read the authors comments and knowing its his first flash then he did a good job. And to CrazyDemon you gave it a 10 for humor yet a 0 for the overall dont you think that a movie that got a 10 for one of the scores at least should get a 1 for overall score.?