Can be worked on.

This isn't bad for a Solo effort, but it needs sound, sound affects, maybe voice actors, click to go dialouge, replay button, etc. Put those in, and it will be perfect, the guy below may be able to help, 4/5 8/10.

Eh...

Not bad. I have sound effects, if you give me your email. PM me. About the flash. Obvious stuff. Needs sound (you obviously know that), The movement of the sprites needs some work. And also, You really have to watch your style mixing. It is extremely annoying to see bad style mixing. Try not to do it so much. Although, it looks like you've already got most of your series done, judging by how fast these are coming out. Anyway, always room to improve. I have a number of sounds. Do you have plans for sonic characters? Those Mecha Sonics seemed to scream "SONIC IS COMING!" Anyway, yeah.

Interesting.

Use of sprite was entertaining, also liked the fight scenes.

But, i didnt like the use of so much dialogue, and was pretty short.