Well, I've given honest reviews of submissions I've seen so far so I'm not going to change now.
I enjoyed that, it was nothing to get excited about, but I watched it all the way to the end. True the story was lost on me, but that has only served purposed as to make me now search for the other instalments in this series.
True, artistic skill could have been better, and a more appreciative audience found elsewhere. But in my opinion the effort has paid-off here and I think you have a good idea. Just tweak the execution a bit into something more action packed, and perhaps a bit more relate-able to an audience who hasn't seen the previous episode.
Adding a small introduction telling the viewer the outlines of the previous episode would suffice.
But not a bad job, I couldn't do any better. But needs some improvement.