Ok so this is my first ever in history MY flash submission, yes i know there are bits that could be betteer or edited but hey, i didn't read the manual for flash so yeah it was difficult
but all in all it's amazing to me, and hi to my buddys on Fb, yes it's me.
i dedicate this to the halloween holidays
ps there wil be a series of chibie comming soon, patience is a virtue
WOW
Very good use of frame by frame work, seems like you didn't use any tweens. I was no better than this when I started, and your motions are pretty nice. Work on smoothing them out on your next toon, and hopefully you keep working hard and having fun :D Great job, says I.
nice first try
it's good for first try and it's actually funny :)
what's the name of the song?
animals by nickleback
It's a good start.
Yes, I think for your first flash ever, you can hold you head up high.
But there are many points on which you could improve.
Foremost, loading. Why load a 3 minute audio clip for a 30 second animation? It increases the file size necessarily and therefore means the pre-loading takes that much longer, which in some cases raises the expectation of the submission.
In this case I'm afraid it did the opposite, it left me disappointed. I wanted to see more, if that makes sense.
It's a good visual style, if a little choppy.
And the lack of a story just meant I couldn't give this more than 5/10.
But you're halfway there, to making very successful flashes. I wish you all the luck you need, but I'm sure if you stick at this, you'll succeed.
