Don't give up
Not awesome but it shows potential, maybe try using vocies next time instead of text. I agree though at least it has correct spelling and grammar.
Simple, cute, nothing mind blowing but is still a nice little movie. And unlike 3/4th of Newgrounders who use text in movies, you used good grammar and spelling, holy crap!
.. and your teacher took off .3 points for your title? How anal can you get...
But the voice balloont went a little bit slow. Ljust make them come up faster.
For a school flash sure nice, and I agree with your teacher that the title is not creative.
Hehehe, still pretty good job.
no offence but it wasnt that great :/
This film is somewhat bearable. But it is to the bare minimum. Be great if this film didn't loop over and over, and I wish there were VAs to make it a little more entertaining. Good artwork I suppose. Somewhat funny.