oh ur to kool cuz!
That was a really funny animation, short but funny. what animation program did you use?
Impressive first submission
I have to disagree with the comment suggesing that you need more voices, though. The whole short works well with no vocals and the visual humour clearly leads the story well. It also helped with that scream at the end, which took me by surprise.
I like your animation style as well, kind of reminds me of Cyanide and Happiness...mixed with a bit of David Firth right at the end, what with the close up of that kids face.
You obviously work really well when it comes to animating to music and I'm guessing that you'll keep building on that strength. If so, I look forward to more.