Short clip of your work. Mini game that shows off promise and effort, for a short time. If you made this longer it could be the start of a decent series.

This was made on 10/26/09, and I am only the sixth person to review it.

A fun game

~~REVIEW~~
A fun game you have here, decent, game with some really sharp graphics and cute at times, very fun indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think its ok as it is now

~~OVERALL~~
Fun and cute game

~X~

great work...kinda

idk i can see you put alot of work in but this is just again another one of those childrens sites trying to pull in a lil free advertisment thru newgrounds the game has about 10 seconds of fun then u realise.. wow thats it?

It's not bad.

It's simple, amusing, and I enjoyed playing it. I kinda wish you'd waited a bit and made a pack of multiple games, but this is fine.

Just a pointer or two. Just add a few more instruction. Tell the player the jump key is hold and release rather than double press, like I though it was, and that they need to wait for the starting flag or else they'll get a foul.

Other than that... add a leader board? It'll help bring more people to your site and make the game more interesting for people who are into that, and people who aren't aren't going to lose anything from the experience