good job on the animation, but there are a few things I dont like
1: the next button, its a pain in the @$$ to click on it because its so small
2: you need more background, just ground and black isn't very appeling to the veiwers\
3: wrong setting all together, bowser is almost always in a castle, and the bridge is a bunch of breakable blocks
however, there are a few good things I liked about it
1: preaty good plot, compared to some of the movies iv'e seen on newgrounds, this is a preaty good one
2: definetly entertaning: luigi steals everything from mario, whats not awsome about that (unless you're a hardcore mario only fan)
I better stop typing or ill never stop, but in short, great short, but could be improved.
Thanks. This was an experimental flash. my new one is coming out way better
Liked the script, but animation needs some work.
I loved the funny nature of the script, which is why I'm giving you a 3, but your animation needs some serious work. Try using all the tutorials scattered about this site, and spend at least a couple days on it before submitting.
Lotta work to be done
Needs voice acting, without it it's just bland. The cursing would really come out then. And I'd suggest removing the Donkey Kong map music and replacing it with something else. It sounds odd in a mario cartoon.
it was good, especialy for wat is usualy sent to newgrounds, and i personally like luigi over mario, so nice. maybe voice acting if possible, but i understand how come that can be a problem, but nice job overall
Actually this was kinda fun!
Alright I admit it, this was actually pretty fun. It reminds me of the style of Mario movies when I was a wee Newgrounder. Keep up the good work dude!