No, we need to stop making bad parodies; er scratch that we need to stop making bad flash like this in general this is NOT "pretty good" nor is it a "good first step" no one asked you to post this on here thus wasting everyones' time please make a GOOD piece or art before placing it on here. Just because you can post something doesn't mean you should. You are not the only one that has done this and will not be the last.....
Good First Step
I like it, the plot is easy enough to follow, but it did seem rush in some places. It felt unfinished, maybe if you spent another hour polishing it, it would vastly improved, but the for time it took it was pretty good. Try to spend for time on future projects, I want to see where go with this.
that was nice especially because you spent a small amount of time on it wonder if anyone has accidentally done that to them self.