Hello there.
Sorry, dearest authour, but you weren't 'inspired'. You ripped it off. Strange character with hoarse voice using fancy words living in a crumbling house in the middle of nowhere, full of insects, with 'friends' that are actually unable to interact, that organises a 'dinner' and ignores the fact his guests don't reply to him. Even the 'creature opens mouth and screeching sounds come out' thing is a rip off.
And yet, I'll try to be fair.
I didn't blam this entry because you, as an animator, have potential. Decent voice-over, rather good animation, decent drawing skills, good taste in flash (yes, I mean salad fingers obviously).
Use what you like, what you are, what you admire and what you have experienced to draw NEW IDEAS out of it. Then use the skills that I can SEE you have, and make something that would be worth my fives. I am sure you can.