Quite unique, I like it.
Good or bad first? Bad? Okay :P
Bad: The music was repetitive, playing over and over like it did. Try to find different music that will still work :D Also, there were chasing and fight scenes... those ALWAYS need to be fast-paced. It makes it more exciting and fun to watch for the viewers. Fight scenes are supposed to be climactic, not slow.
Good: It was all very well drawn and the sound quality was great. The storyline topped it all off as well, really cool!
Anyways, hope my critiquing helps (And I hope I spelled critiquing right...) So, nice animation, hope to see more from you!