Thanks for the tips on speed and such, I agree that some of the scenes, particularly the chasing one, were pretty uninteresting. Also, I'm definitely going to make a better fight scene the next time I make a movie that needs one because as you said it's not particularly climactic or exciting.

Thank you for enjoying the creativity and art though, I was really wondering how the story and ideas would play out and it seems like a lot of people enjoyed them.

Much thanks for your review, and you are most certainly spelling and doing 'critiquing' correctly! :D

Haha thank you I'm glad that all worked out the way it did! :D

Yeah the characters being all so similar was pretty cheap on my part, I'll admit that. :P

Also, sorry the beginning is really, really slow, I pretty much just had it that way because I couldn't think of more to put in and I wanted it to go along with the music. The ending was just another issue with time constraints and such, if I had started this earlier it probably would have been a bit clearer and more interesting, but right now it was a little lacking as you say. :3

Thanks for the review, I'll improve on these things the next time I make a movie! :D

I was worried the music would get humdrum, so thanks for letting me know! XD

I'll be sure to add a bit more "Spice," to it next time, promise!

Thanks for mentioning it's creative, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Also, thanks for reviewing my film! :3

Okay, I'm going to make sure my next movie is much clearer in its storytelling! :D

Thank you so much for liking the originality though, I wasn't sure if I had gotten it from somewhere or not. I really liked that movie the Iron Giant, and I wanted to make the Elevators like the Iron Giant but it just didn't turn out that way due to my time limit. The Iron Giant just had a lot of emotion and you could sympathize with it because it was so human, and had I had more time I would hope I could have breathed a little life into my little metal creations.

Also thanks for wishing me a good grade, I hope I get a good one too!

Thanks for your thoughtful words, I hope to improve my storytelling next time! ^-^