animation/drawings decent, poor story
I couldn't help but feel as if I were watching a parody of an anime, how something comes out of nowhere at the last second and saves whoever is in trouble. It was done too many times in this short, and it was either extremely obvious or totally random. The pace was also really slow, and I would have fast forwarded through it all the way to the end, only to be disappointed with the "to be continued". That sparkle in the eye was cheesy, but seemed to be okay at first. After a few times, it just added to the redundancy of the animation as a whole.
I think you would do a better job with the game you're making for the iPhone, but Yang Mi Ae definitely could have done more with the story.