Marcus Falden
Great Animation and Love the ACTIOn Kepp up the Mech porno coming
Author Comments
Shattered Heaven Act 3
Part 2
If you're going to critique me, that's great. I always welcome good advice, anything that will help me grow and get better. If you're just going to bash me, "this sucked" "you're horrible" etc, don't waste my time, or yours. Those comments will be taken with a grain of salt, or none at all.
"Fading Light"
Things are intensifying as the conflict is getting hotter. Demetrius Libertas, an ex representative for the EAP has shown his face once again. His intentions are unknown at the moment. Battles are still waging amongst the various Angel training facilities but all eyes are on New York as Adam Novus tries to fend off the mysterious frames that have advanced.
Adam Novus: nikedrummer33
Sharon Amare: Mochan
Stephen Novus: Stephen Alonso
Ashley Bellelus: Mippa
Mario Liberalis: Mysticshinhanku
Heather Pertencia: candi
Luscious Malum: Aramek
Gail Contandino: Photoshoptimeryan
Solus Saevio: clwinston
Forza Devinco: Sfox
Serenity Credo: Rina-chan/Haushinka
Chris Procella: Dymatrex
Keira Sequor: Merodi
Leo Ombra: Leo Rubino
Amy: Lira Tao
Demetrius Libertas: Russ
Lenard Shaw: Edwyn
Yuna Innitor: Hnilmik
Elaine Libre: Scarlotte
Freya Abby: Mirielle
Christina Effloresco: Sapphire
Jen Fama: Catoni15
Sean Repens: Rebelcheese
Mike Aquilis: Sonicmega
Marius: bomberman61
Music: "Decisive Battle" Kawai Kenji -Gundam 00 OST
Weird, but good
It doesn't help that I did not see the original episodes, but it is nice how this is a pretty awesome series. The dialogue was very clever, especially the end with those two guys. The animation was good, but it was in fact kind of weird. I think the faces were just drawn in a kind of weird way, but they did work in a weird way as well. It is obvious this series has a lot going on, but everything seems to work well with itself. I guess I am glad to be introduced to it, even if it was at a bad time.
u sure made a big improvement from ur previous one
this is like a combination of gundam seed, seed destiny, 00 and code geass.
nice job
awesome series
awesome series and great storyline the machines had nice designs keep up the great work
Make More!
I hope you make another Mecha animation, only instead of Gundams, maybe you could based it on Armored Core. And in terms of criticism, you should improve the graphics and design.
AdamTilford responds:
Well, for one it's not based on Gundams it's a series so there's going to be more. It's an animated series based off my novels. The designs were based off AC and Gundam as that's what helped me get better at drawing mecha.
Few things, the orbital weapons are actually called orbits which I was influenced from AC 2 and AC 2 AA. Ironically when I started watching Gundam they had funnels and such, so from there people would always assume I took the idea from Gundam when I didn't. I already have newer designs for each mech in the series but decided to stick with the gundam influenced ones while I'm working on getting a literary agent and the novels out there to be published.
Either way I'm fine with people constantly bringing up Gundam in a review. It's like everyone trying to do an action anime with fighting, people constantly bring up DBZ.
Though I do want to point out that this series did not start off in anime form, and the novels are much much better.
In regards to improving the graphics and design, well, I'm always improving from scene to scene as I keep getting more comfortable with Flash.
Still my art, line art and colored stuff is naturally 100x more detailed and refined than the animation. Since I do this for fun, I'm merely focusing on trying to show the story and entertain. If people are entertained than I'm happy. I don't care if my animation or art style isn't the best. All I ask is that people watch the full series or realize that these are broken up into scenes from a complete 20 minute episode.
Thanks for the review.