Your commentary tells the tale

This wasn't by far the worst thing I've seen on here and I can see you put in a marginal amount of effort. My big problem is with the fact you say it took you two hours to make this. Any flash that takes two hours to make probably isn't worth putting on here. Next time try adding better sounds, crisper drawing and work on your focus (no one want to watch the top of someone's head walk across a room.)
1/5